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Friday, October 4, 2013

Just A Long Break


along a winding road
we find the twists
follow the turns

and come full circle

down a path
we feel the rush
flowing through the stream

and come full circle

below a tree
we rest the bones
feeling the freedom

and come full circle

.a.poem.by.deborah.


i.just.need.a.rest.




6 comments:

  1. I am very poor at poetry but ooccasionally I come across ones I can understand and enjoy like those learnt during my school days. This one by Deborah is beautiful because I can grasp possible pholisophical interpretations it bears. Hope this time I can post this comments

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  2. Likewise, my poor grasp of the language limits me to simple ones like this. I love reading poems but write one like a preschooler.

    Glad to see you here but Pakcik. FYI I'm no longer a regular blogger. Having said that, I do come by visiting 'old friends' best I can.

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  3. Two roads diverged in a yellow wood,
    And sorry I could not travel both
    And be one traveler, long I stood
    And looked down one as far as I could

    To where it bent in the undergrowth;
    Then took the other, as just as fair,
    And having perhaps the better claim,
    Because it was grassy and wanted wear;
    Though as for that the passing there
    Had worn them really about the same,

    And both that morning equally lay
    In leaves no step had trodden black.
    Oh, I kept the first for another day!
    Yet knowing how way leads on to way,
    I doubted if I should ever come back.
    I shall be telling this with a sigh

    Somewhere ages and ages hence:
    Two roads diverged in a wood, and I-
    I took the one less traveled by,
    And that has made all the difference.

    Have a great week, and keep a song in your heart.
    Lee.

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    1. Oh wow Uncle Lee!! As of immediate effect I hereby declare myself yr biggest fan ever!!! *clap! Clap!*
      This is awesome piece of work. Honoured to have this up on my wall.. TQ TQ so so much!

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  4. Mama Tim, just to let you know I am making my blog private on Wednesday. My notice has been up a week but as you busy not dropping by...please check out my blog asap.
    Thank you.
    Best regards.
    Lee.

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